New bottle with old marketing

I write B2B marketing content for a living. My days go to white papers, case studies, and decks for buyers who read forty pitches a week and remember none of them.

Two kinds of copy fail, and they fail in opposite directions.

The first kind is all novelty. The writer coins a phrase for what the product does, builds the page on it, and admires the result. The buyer meets a word she has never seen, attached to a problem she has never named, and does the sensible thing: she moves on. Nobody is hostile to new ideas. But a reader asked to learn a vocabulary and weigh a claim at once will decline both. Strange copy costs effort, and effort is the one thing a busy buyer has already spent.

The second kind is all familiarity. The writer opens with the sentence every vendor in the category has printed, the one about enterprises facing unprecedented change. The buyer agrees with it instantly and forgets it just as fast. Agreement is not attention. A sentence the reader has read a hundred times passes through her like light through glass.

What works sits between the two. The page opens on ground the reader knows cold: the late evening, the spreadsheet that should have closed by lunch, the report that arrives a day after the decision it was meant to inform. She recognises the scene, so she keeps reading. Then one fact arrives that she did not expect, a number or an angle or a cost she had never added up. That fact lands because the familiar scene made room for it. The same fact, delivered cold, would have read as noise.

The order matters. Surprise first asks the reader to trust a stranger. Familiarity first earns the trust, and surprise spends it.

The rule is short enough to tape above the desk. When the idea is old, find the angle that makes it strange. When the idea is strange, find the detail that makes it feel like home. Copy that does neither is either ignored or misunderstood, and a reader who ignores you and a reader who misunderstands you will both go on to choose someone else.

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